Graduation Of 2011

Dear Reader,
This is one of my least favorite essay but i thought that i should give you the good and bad of my writing. I like my introduction and conclusion. If I were to be grading this essay i woud give myself a 3.5 . I think that ishould be gradee on my introdution and conclusion.
Thank you,
Wanda Colon
Graduation Of 2011
Do you think that you will be able graduate in 2011? Well I think I will because I have everything it takes I am smart, have good grades, and I set goals and limits for myself. I think that after reading my essay you will have a whole different perspective on statistics. As a young teenage girl with a five month old I will succeed.
First of all being smart has a lot to do with my graduation because if you are not smart how will you get good grades. I get good grades I even got an 86 percent on an unexpected quiz! I also keep my folders, notebooks, binder, and homework organized. Having everything you need for a certain class is also a necessity because without the tools you need you will not be prepared for things you might need to do.
Another reason why I feel I will graduate is because I have great family support. Family support plays a big role in my life because without you are family you will never be able to handle every situation on your own. My family helps me talk things out so I would not be so stressed out. They are also very supportive of my discussions and me and help me with them.
My final reason on my thought of graduating on 2011 is because I have set goals and limits for my self. Some of my goals are to do well in school, earn scholarships and go to law school. Some limits I have set for myself include curfew, study habits, and music. If I do not set limit to these thing I will end up getting all tied up in other things that do not matter and that will not get me anywhere.
In conclusion I believe I will graduate in 2011 because I am smart, have good family support and have set goals and limits for myself. Now that you have read my essay do you have a different perspective on statistics?